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Monday, July 25, 2011

GUTGAA - First 200 words contest!!

Deana Barnhart's GUTGAA blogfest is coming to a close - thanks so much for hosting, Deana!!  The last challenge/contest is on the first 200 words of your (my) novel.


You may have read this before - but here's the first 200 (or 189) words of my YA Magical Realism novel, THE GLASS PRINCE:

Strange images started to pop in front of my face, as if some phantom turned page after page of a photo album too close to my eyes. I shoved my head back into the chair cushion and scanned the room for this personal-space invader. I wanted to see how he managed to juggle those images in one hand, while whacking me senseless with the other. My head ached something fierce. But, I was definitely alone in the living room. I still heard Mom tinkering in the kitchen. I tried to blink the images and the pain away.



Blink one. The leather chair I curled up in turned into some gaudy four-poster bed.


Blink two. I sat in my chair again.


Blink three. I recognized the white-steel front door. Mom’s ugly dried-flower wreath hung from it.


Blink four. The door changed to a gray plank with a nail sticking out of the middle, and dipped candles on a string hung there.


I clenched my eyes shut and rubbed my temples.


“Mom,” I yelled.


“Honey?” she called back. Her voice sounded small, muffled, as if I had cotton in my ears.

 
 
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