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How cool is it that day "B" of the A-Z coincides with my Birthday? I don't mean to shamelessly plug myself (or, do I?) but...OK, I'm shamelessly plugging myself. :) With that in mind ~ I forgot I needed to post a log line for my current WiP, as part of Shelly Watter's Blogfest "Win a Critique from Agent Suzie Townsend" contest! Here's my 140 character twitter pitch:
When The Glass Prince claims 17-year-old Clara to the family curse, she must work with Snow White’s immortal son to break it, or die trying.
What do you think? Any good? There's still time to sign up for the contest. Pitches need to be in by tomorrow, April 3rd.
And, as I also promised to be (B)rief today, I'll end it here with a final...
To me, to me!!! :) Have a great day of writing/reading/whatnot out there, everyone!
50 comments:
Happy B-day, dear Donea! Didn't know you were a fellow Aries :)
Hope someone hot will jump out of the cake for you today :)
Happy Birthday! Farmer Ted turned out pretty okay, huh?
Have a wonderful birthday! Enjoy the day :)
Happy Birthday! Hope it's special!
Have a lovely Birthday! Hugs..
Hi Donea
Interesting pitch but I didn't quite get 'claims...to...'. Do you claim someone TO a curse? Read a bit awkwardly for me. Might also be more of a hook if you said what the curse was.
And Happy B'day!
regards,
mood
Happy birthday! May you have many many more.
:-)
I saw the Nah Nah Nah and thought Batman!
Happy Birthday!
ALL THE BEST! YAY, DONEA!!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your logline is FANTATIC. What a fun premise!
Enjoy your B-DAY weekend!
Michael
Happy Birthday!
I love your concept. I'm a bit confused about claiming Clara to the curse, but you've got the goal and stakes and a really intriguing cast of characters!
Good luck in the contest!
Vicki
Happy B-day and many more!! I love the concept of the story. The only thing that confused me a bit was "claiming" the family curse. But I know nothing about pitches or agents or any of these things so don't take my word for it.
Dafeenah
happy birthday to you! :)
Enjoy your special day! :D
Happy Birthday! You sweet thing! It's your birthday but you gave me the gift of becoming a follower! Thanks so much!
Hope you have a wonderful day!
How cool is that. Have a great B-Birthday.
Cool! Happy Birthday!
Many happy returns, may there be many more!
How convenient! Happy Birthday!
Arlee Bird
Merry Birthday!!
Interesting pitch. I'm not sure what "claim" to a curse means. What is this curse? Good luck to you!
What a fun blog! Happy Birthday.
I agree with other comments on "claims". Otherwise, I likey.
Happy Birthday Donea!
Happy Birthday!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Wow, amazing that it worked out for the A to Z. I hope you have an awesome, awesome day.
By the way, your pitch sounds very intriguing.
Happy birthday!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
Happy happy birthday!!!!
Farmer Ted rocks.
And love the pitch:) Good luck!
This is the 2nd birthday post. The other one is somewhere in the 400s of the blogfest challengers.
I like the pitch but the first part confused me at first. It the word claims I think that through me off.
Happy Birthday! I love twists on fairy tales. THis is a great pitch though I am wondering if the glass prince and Snow White's son are the same person or not? "claiming to the curse" is a strange way of saying what I *think* you're saying, but it works. Sometimes unusual is good!
Happy birthday, Donea!!!
Happy Birthday! Maybe just for the pitch you can switch "claim" to "bind"?
Otherwise, great pitch!
Happy Birthday! Great pitch!
Happy birthday! Oh, and I love your Sixteen Candles reference. A few months ago I watched it for the first time in years, and it *still* cracked me up.
Happy Birthday!!!
Happy Birthday! Hopefully your day will be filled with all things birthday... birthday cake, birthday gifts... Happy Birthday!
Happy Birthday :) That's an interesting pitch. I like the concept. Good luck.
ooh Happy Birthday Donea! I saw another blogger whose b'day was today as well :D
*blushing* Thank you so very much, everyone! I so appreciate all the happy bdays and well wishes. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside, truly! This is such a gracious, welcoming, AWESOME community!! I love it and I <3 all of you ~ :) If I didn't thank you via e-mail, I'll be by to visit very soon!
Write on!!!
Happy happy happy birthday! Hope you had a great one!
Happy Birthday! Now go do something crazy. Just don't get caught.
Well...Happy Birthday. I hope you day was wonderful!
Happy Birthday! Hope you had a great day :)
Hope you had a lovely birthday yesterday! Woo! Happy birthday. I like your pitch--sounds seriously intriguing!!
Happy Birthday! Hope you got my picture of my cute little Maggie. She is with me always as I am on the computer.
Have a happy birthday!
Happy Birthday, Donna and nice to meet you!
Kathy M.
From the Land of A-Z
Wow you lucked out in coming up with a "B" topic! Hope that your birthday was a happy one!
Sheila Staley : Reviewer & Writer
Book reviews and Author Interviews at my blog at http://whynotbecauseisaidso.blogspot.com/
Happy Birthday Donea Lee !! And nice to meet you !!
~MICHELLE~
http://writer-in-transit.co.za/category/other/rambles-rants-and-raves/
It's a sign you know - your birthday on the letter B! Happy Birthday!
Ellie Garratt
Are you kidding ME?! I forgot your birthday?!!!!!! I'm so SORRY! I love you! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! I'm sending you a million virtual calorie free brownies and cookies! I hope you had a fabulous birthday!
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