Welcome to Writerly Wednesday at The QoP! I hope I'm posting this in a timely fashion. Wouldn't want the cold shoulder from you. I do try to offer up entertaining, useful tidbits for my lovely followers...wouldn't want you all to kick me to the curb, after all. :)
(you caught all the "blech", right? Smarty pants - I KNEW you would!)
So, if you missed me gushing about the Grammar Divas workshop I went to a few weeks ago - you can read about it HERE. And if you did catch it, you know that I promised to share some fabulous tip I learned. I decided to go with cliches, euphemisms, and idioms. We use them all the time. Heck! They crop up in my writing ALL the time. BUT, as the writing world continues to tell us...and frankly, I agree...using these common, overused phrases in your writing steals away your voice, your style and your tone.
Here's a handy list I got from the fab Grammar Divas of cliches, euphemisms, and idioms to watch for in your writing:
ace in the hold goes to show sick and tired
all wet goes without saying sigh of relief
as a matter of fact high and mighty significant other
at this point in time in a nut shell sneaking suspicion
babe in the woods in a timely fashion take exception
before long in place of take offense to
behind the eight ball kick to the curb time and time again
better safe than sorry knuckle under the long and short
cold shoulder like the plague tip of the iceberg
couldn't care less long and short of it tried and true
day in and day out on the part of under the gun
down and dirty on thin ice wakeup call
fear and trembling par for the course whole other story
few and far between poor excuse for window of opportunity
fly in the face of put on an act sick and tired
for all intents and purposes rock and a hard place sigh of relief
Now, I'll have to say that I'm of the opinion that eliminating ALL of these phrases from your writing may not be necessary. Let's face it - this is how the world talks. But, overusing them in your writing....well, ultimately your call. Tell me - What's one cliche, euphemism or idiom that just makes you cringe when you read it? What's your take on using them in writing?
14 comments:
Great post! I'll have to visit your link to the Grammar Workshop. I do my best to avoid cliches, but I do use them when writing dialogue. As you say, that's how the world speaks!
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Great tips! I noticed several in the list that I might want to re-think.
As for making me cringe, it's not really so much a cliche, but overuse. I've noticed that some authors will reuse one particular word anytime a particular character comes into the scene. Someone who's always shrugging/smiling/talking in chagrin or the like.
Hmm... I'm all for cliche if it is used right.
Sadly, the correct usage can be a mucky thing to wade through.
So I avoid it altogether. (In theory.)
;-)
Ooh these are great. I never really thought of cliches and I don't notice them too much when I read. Hopefully I don't have any in my novel! But I can see having them in dialogue if your character is like, a chliche-nut or something. But yeah, as a narrator, that might get annoying if they're all over the place ;p
Gosh, great tip to hear! I actually looked over the list and don't use too many all too often so I find that either good? or not so good? I plan to look at the gladd half full :)
I made up my own the other day, and embarrassed the crud out of myself. I got notes back from a critique group member, who liked my pages for the most part, but noted that: "for all intensive purposes" is not a phrase. It's for all INTENTS and PURPOSES, and even then, don't use that phrase because it irks me." I felt like a big jack-wagon. Especially since she's a 19-year-old college student and I'm...well, much older. That's what I get for majoring in Outdoor Recreation :)
i think you can only avoid cliches up to one point--they sneak in some way or the other. its just a good idea to keep them minimal :)
also, you have sigh of relief up there twice. which might be there to point out its a double-offense to use it, cause i seem to use it a lot :D
Sometimes those cliches are sneaky. That's where a good critique partner comes in. Thanks for the helpful post.
Your title was too funny.
This is often said at my house: "...the bottom line is..." and I just annoy myself when it comes out of my mouth.
Great cliche list! New follower and crusader! I look forward to reading more.
Nikki
copied and saved! thanks for the list!
You're all very welcome! This list will help me a bunch, I'm sure! It's already been useful, as Jess helped me realize, in learning that "All intents and purposes" is the correct version of my often used "All intensive purposes"! *shakes head* Yeah, I know.... :D
Oh neat!! I had a crit partner friend get onto me for using a cliche or two, so now trying to figure out another way to say it! It's not that easy to think of another way, either! Thanks for the list Donea. Will come in handy!
Hey fellow crusader, I'm stopping by to say hi and to follow you. Cliches are okay if part of dialogue. I like your list.
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